That could be something pretty dope. Are you going to redraw it to something based on that roughage. Roughage. Roughage, that spelling just dont look right to me today. Roughage
Yes... its abstract anyhow but shading is rough as fuck with one ball point pen and a notebook when the last time you drew was a decade ago and you had a studio in your house for all your supplies lol
looks like too much anger to me. at least makodragons doodles have a comedic caricature aspect to them. even if it does show he has a penchant for large hips and thighs